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When

When

will you be ready

to open your heart to me

When

will I know

which way to go

When

the time comes

will I just run

When

will I know

which way to go

When

will I get a sign

that you are mine

When

will I open my heart to you

When

the time comes

will I just run

will I know

which way to go

When

it happens

will I know

when

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just thoughts about when things happen deciding what to do about them and how confusing it all is sometimes.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:01am
©5 March 2005 - 11:08am — pamschwetz
21 November 2005 - 9:38pm — D' Knave (not verified)
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I like the questions this piece asks, for they are questions everyone asks at one time. Very nice.

8 May 2005 - 2:36pm — fighter4life
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You show the confusion well in this poem, nice job.

8 May 2005 - 1:16pm — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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I like the emotion of waiting in this one