Let Me Be Your Guitar

Let me be your guitar

Rub against you my star

You can play all my chords

We can make beautiful music together

I have but one request

Cuz I like you the best

You could hold me so tight

It would feel so right

You can play every string

You can make me sing

I'm so in tune with you

You always see me through

We can make beautiful music together

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written long ago but love all the metaphors with meaning...

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pamschwetz Posted Dec 22, 4:58 PM
Let Me Be Your Guitar
I wanted to record this response cuz it made me feel good from Ryan Cabrera's messageboards...I wanted to add this comment for this poem...cuz wow, what a huge compliment....Pam
i*love*jordan Posted Dec 22, 6:05 PM
That is awesome! That is the best poem I have ever read in my life!

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pamschwetz Posted Dec 22, 6:14 PM
thanx so much for that huge compliment and please just click the poetry link and see my other stuff there...If you loved that one...take your time and read the 100 or so there and if you could go to that one and critique it with what you just said it would mean so much to me cuz whoever else takes the time to visit there would hear your comment that means lots to me...or just sign my guestbook and say it there if u don't have enuf time but thanks so much for responding...it means a lot to me...

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i*love*jordan Posted Dec 22, 6:24 PM
Your welcome.

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I love my John for who he is, I love the fact he gave me my first guitar(acoustic)and I love playing my guitar and making beautiful music not just for the sound of the music but the memories of the instrument and the man that give me endless happiness your piece sums it up