Beyond the gabled houses with gold flames
beyond the over crowded streets filled with
unfocused citizens
beyond the surprisingly friendly street dogs
making their daily social calls
this is where our love fully cemented
though I knew we were always as one
from the first moment you hugged me
in that dim dark paneled hallway
it was a collaboration of many days
there after
that life reaffirmed to me that we are
eternally one
even if you are cruelly taken from me
you will always be mine
and I, yours...............
(Oct. 21, 2013 150pm )
Why thank you both so very much.............
you honor me with your time and comments. sincerely, M.
SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL...TO SAY THE LEAST!
This is simply beautiful and moving...Enjoyed reading it over and over again...Well done O Pale Winged Poetess!
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
There is nothing else to say
There is nothing else to say except "beautiful". Maybe, "pure love".
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "