I HAVE TO PONDER #

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JOURNAL # 41

'I Have To Ponder'
how one mortal man
can claim to know
what is in other people's hearts
God gave no such gift to
any mortal man
I read so much judgment in this poem
I sadly muse
over the age old warning one far greater
than us all
loosely translated
'as ye judges, ye shall be judged'
I pray this postulating scribe
can live up to his own judgment of others
I adore the writer of such words but
cringe when he judges others and questions
their faith without any individual's proof
to condemn the random masses he views
and sits down to pen and paper to debase
with his claims
certainly God knows who the people he claims
are
but I dare say the writer does not
he assumes
and to assume is a dangerous hobby to take
up, my grandmother always said
so I must challenge this said sir
until such scribe has the ability to read
others' minds, hearts and souls
and can further prove it beyond a doubt
thus so
such poetry writ
is but speculation scattered upon the heads
of many he cannot have the means to truthfully
claim superior knowledge of their said lives
for until you walk a mile in each those worshipers' shoes
The has not the right to stand in God's place to judge
the depth of their faith, praise or spiritual dedication
for as ye speaks, another might stand as well to make the same
claim about your own pious self in a crowd of another day 's
worshipers' come some other Friday
and if he but did so and you learned of this
you know you would be highly upset that he should
judge you without knowing your heart through and through
for as Jesus said ,He Who Hath No Sin Cast The First Stone
and you sir being a mortal man should set down his stones
and walk away from such high and mighty claims of
supposed knowing..................
(Jan. 16, 2012 1201am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written for a recent poem I read from an admired fellow post poems poet but due to my admiration of such a poet I won't list his id nor his poem that I am differing upon greatly but he will know who he is and get this. I am sorry but I could not block this poem from coming dear friend. You know you and I have strong disagreeing views on these type of poems you write and I have made you angry in conversations in the past over such poems. No man is better than another in my view. We are all the same in the eyes of God. My strongly disagreeing spirit could not remain silent on this latest installment of yours. I believe when one raises themselves above others they do their own souls a terrible injustice. I wish you would learn and or teach yourself more humility on this front. This latest poem of yours screams heavy judgment of others and some very high self lifting of yourself by comparing yourself to many famous men.

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