from the smooth surfaces
of sound sleep
beyond the realm of
R E M so deep
rivers of reverent blood flow
heat
imagination
charring with the pressure of
a weakened heart beat's
wobbled sweep
plaque
'The Dark Cataclysm' of
an unhealthy life lived
to the full
via
ill replete.......................
(Dec. 16, 2011 718pm)
Wow
Very well put together. Had a nice flow and the message is one I can relate to.
Very nice.
Thank you Kalvin, for your encouragement!
I read your words too. I've found when we are in a lot of pain or going through a lot of traumatic things in life, it helps so much to write it all out. It helps one to unload and get a better look at what is really going on with us. Poets, rappers, people who journal , people who draw and or paint have it easier are so very blessed as they have an outlet to use to work through the harder lessons in life. I hope you share more with us, much much more. I predict if you remain true to yourself that after you work out all the pain and general stuff that has been bothering you then the good stuff will come after that and that is the Really Good Stuff. The joy, the laughter, the insight that is designated as only yours, and best of all the love, love for country, love for the good in others, love for God, those are angles and spheres that will really expand you and grow you as the artist I can see already that you obviously are. I look forward to future readings, All the best, Melissa Lundeen.
Thank you for reading my
Thank you for reading my work. I appreciate it. Your works are quite impressive as well.
I just try to expose some of lifes horrors and hardships. Thanks again for takin a look
and commenting.
Kalvin C. H.
Simple and real thanks.
Simple and real thanks.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."