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JOURNAL # 41

ribbons flutter
draping the air
acrobatic sheets
cascading
like curtains
everywhere
all across
our hearts
beauty so bursting
begins to flair
twining merrily
in captivating revolutions
here and there
brushing so many
former sore spots
with medicinal care
drifting yourself
as you do
deeper and deeper
still into me
we collide
so joyous
and spasmodically
keep in mind
you are not Titanic
nor just any Ice berg
am I
but
together we make
a divine waterway
that others only wish
they could
make use of
in their own personal love lives................
(July 20, 2011 251pm)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

was feeling romantic with all these poets so deep in love on line, I didn't want to feel left out ...............laughs

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Hi! Nice to see you back in

Hi! Nice to see you back in form. Touch wood. Keep it up...and let 'us' make the most of it...laughs and laughs...


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

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hmmm Make the Most of IT

Freudian slip? Dare I suspect winks...................
just kidding........enjoy the humor of that.........