WHISPERS LIKE AN OCEAN #

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JOURNAL # 40

and in your words

please realize

the mist sleeps

in her lovely bliss

as two thankful creatures

alas

warm themselves

by the warm summer's river

for such beings

love is a waterfall 

that 'Whispers Like An Ocean'

as the world unknowingly drowns

from the moisture of its surprising breath..........

(Mar. 5, 2011 753pm)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

my poetic reply to fellow post poems poet Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem 'Without You'

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