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JOURNAL #19

cool as hell

a truly stretched point in irony

'Rest In Peace'

it had a rather chilly blood like flow

to it

I felt rather like a hungry vampire

while reading it

then the ending threw me

quite happily surprised

against a lovely well cushioned wall

and my previous doubt dribbled all

over itself

in that exact moment

in effect I liked such

the said feeding that it gave me

presence and power

unique yet subtle

tranquility all the same

very mesmerizing your Stephen King

like words my dear Mr. Ward

with its happy hand buzzer like ending

why I say

Bravo

Bravo my dear deliciously riveting sir!........

(Dec. 1, 1998)

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