CHANCING YOUR TIDE

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JOURNAL #33

my, how you have become

rain on the vine

hope in the valley

courage in the shadows

promise in the wake of

tragedy

why, with you I can see the

bridge

and hear the gurgling of the

cool fresh waters below

but I have to ask

will your latent riptide

tear me to shreds

should I dive in just a little deeper

fool am I to admit?

that only you can know the answer

to this very this

we contemplate the outcome of

our combined futures

but for neither of us

are the dice set

to roll us a win.............

(Jan. 24, 2008 1231am)




Author's Notes/Comments: 

trying to understand something uncertain I'm going through.....

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