A LONGING ANSWERED #

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JOURNAL #35

and so sir

shall I sit awhile

and long with you

sighs!

indeed I shall

it is part of your

timeless male beauty

to stream such enchantment

and thought

into one glorious gorgeous

collage of words

you captivate this reader

as you hold your hand out

to the world

smitten are these eyes

to truly know the man

behind such verse................

signed

a misty eyed poetess

(Aug. 27, 2009 501am)


Author's Notes/Comments: 

my first poetic like critque. I had to add it as a poem to my web page
It is a poetic reply to fellow post poems poet Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem 'A Longing'

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