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JOURNAL # 41

she balances charm and tragedy
between the ledges of her mind
and the tip of her pen
young mysterious and granite fragile
she animates powerfully
her construction of thoughts
come at your eyes like a twister
what live farm animal is she going
to fling past your eyes next
her fluidity saves her angles from
their own blade sharp edges
meteor born
she emotes the gathering of
self destruction
dismantled
but so personally informed
she is
the quintessential 'Poet In Determinate'......
(March 24,2015 1056pm)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I enjoyed  a new poet on here tonight. Her work though I enjoyed it I feared my poem about my reading experience of it might offend or upset the new addtion to our community so I chose to keep her nameless. I would never wish to give anyone a complex. Feel free to take up the gauntlet of discovering her for yourself and if you like even take it a step further and privately pm me just to see for yourself if you too can figure out whom I am referring to. She is good but different I'll give her that. Smiles it's not often we challenge each other on here in our comment boxes eh? Think of this as a new game for the old crowd!

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last updated 25 March 2015 - 3:11am
©25 March 2015 - 3:01am — palewingedpoetess
27 March 2015 - 8:36am — bishu
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12th reader

Who is the poet you referred??

©bishu 

 

10 September 2015 - 12:32am — palewingedpoetess
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I'd rather not kiss and tell espeically when the telling is

to the negative. I live by the motto of if you have nothing good to say about someone say nothing at all except in this instance I spoke leaving the individual anonymous. To be honest now too much time has passed and I frankly don't recall the new poet in our community at that time when I wrote this. Sorry to disappoint brother bishu......sincerely, M.