I deserve nothing
but your glare
I hold no office
harbor no guilt
suspect no controversy
I am blameless
I am spirit
I influence
most quietly
beauty's own
inspiration
you feel God
through my
hugely tiny
felt existence
think of me
as an invaluable
'Love Bead'
I am your better half
for without me you
could never be whole......
(March 19, 2015 1110pm)
SOUL STIRRING INDEED
This is probably one of the best poems you have written. You speak of the human aspect of love and so beautifully link it with the divine. Adam needed Eve even in the Garden of Eden. So do their descendants living on this planet. Your contemplative composition stirred my soul and beautified my imagination. Well done!
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
Only history will answer that and either agree with you
on the matter or disagree but I smile when I think you ponder my poetry and the calibre of it in the scheme of all the poems I've writ to date. That truly makes me smile. Every poetess needs a counter poet like you Sir Poet in her corner. Thank you for being mine. ..........you know who .......smiles