i hate this world that has torn me
torn my heart
torn my mind
torn my soul to pieces
your in a daze
walking around
you know nothing
you are nothing
you think your everything
your life is just a haze
i see through the lies
i see through you
i see through the world
and stare into space
looking for a place i belong
but i know deep down - it dont exist
i stand and i stare
watch this world pass by
my life's in slow motion, souls lost in the commotion
now im wondering, why am i here
are you even near
do you even care that im torn
for it was you who has torn me
I like this poem. Great job.