as i gently cry myself to sleep,
do you even care why i weep?
you were never there when i needed you,
when i needed somone to pull me through,
o how i wish, you wanted me,
the way i wanted you.
now i cry myself to sleep,
now i cry myself to my eternal sleep.
I liked this poem alot. sorry for always saying that when i critique but thats what i i think about your poems i like them alot.I'm not going to say i understand because there are different things that people go through in life but i can say i cry myself to sleep almost everynight. so my heart goes out to you.
kristyn
once again really great poem. lots of feeling. really sad too almost made me start cryin even if it is short. thats the way i like a lot of poems short but well constructed and urs has that.
to only gain to ablility to never wish for death...may we all receive it. Very nice write...emotions on paper yet touching the heart.