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Heaven
I'm fading in black
And white's run away
The colors all died
Just left to decay
I'm fading to dull
I'm turning to grey
And here I recall
Those bright sunny days
I think of a rainbow
And I know how it feels
To be lost in an ocean
Of lifeless and tears
I'm fading to wind now
Not gonna decay
Becasue I'll stay here now
With bright sunny days
hey thanks for the critique. By the way i really like this poem. i a can actually paint a picture of it as i read it. Good Job. Please keep writing.
I'm fading to wind now
Not gonna decay
Becasue I'll stay here now
With bright sunny days
well written and the way you done this poem is fantstic and heartfelt..well done and hope my peace thoughts will also touch your heart