Flashbacks






"Flashbacks"



~o0o~

Last eve I heard a whippoorwill

Calling from the night.

The golden moon low overhead,

Filled the yard with light.

~o0o

That plaintive call just broke my heart.

Waves of sorrow came.

My eyes teared up with memories,

OH!  I hate this game!

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It seems that at the strangest times,

Something takes me there.

The keeper of my dreams must know

Sorrow that I bear.

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Yet he (or she), will snatch me up,

Just some will or whim,

And tumble me in flames of hurt,

To remember him.

~o0o~

A sea of daisies in the field,

The crow's startled cry,

The warm wind blowing through my hair,

He just said, “Goodbye.”

~o0o~

I knew not then that n'ere would I

See his face again.

I loved him with youth's purest heart

My husband, and my friend.

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The smallest thing brings it all back,

Rolling in my head.

A fog of pain so sore I strain

Tumbling in our bed.

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The lightning bugs with amber lights,

Tiny lanterns, fly.

Across your grave, eternal sleep,

Love, please tell me why.

~o0o~

I try to shore my life with prayer,

Pleading, then I cry.

I wish I could re-live tonight

That day we said goodbye.

~o0o~




Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a give me ten challenge from Kris Snow and this is more fun than I had imagined.  I encourage anyone to try it.

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Jessica, you carried me back to days of childhood, & then plunged me into deep days of Past, dredged up & laying drying in my Now, & then flung me, all so bewildered & crying into a future I have barely yet not stopped dreaming of. You are a master at wringing emotions from the heart; both yours & mine. I could smell the moaning backwaters, the musty will-o-the-wisps glowing across the valleys, & so much more that Southern climes leave so indelible on our young, pliant memories. Thank you. I hope to visit you "there" again, where it's always Springtime. Honeysuckle has no rank on you in the way your word-scents inspire. "J-e, M S.. V.V." Teddy (If this came from "TEN", what will come from "1,000"?


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