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I feel guilty

I blame me

Cuz you wanted to have your cake

And eat it too

So I'm sorry your a bitch

And I'm sorry I love you

C I want what you want

So take your cake

Fuck lick the plate

And continue to pour salt on my open wounds

C I want what you want

But I give it to you

Cuz your a bitch

And I luv you

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:38pm
©8 February 2003 - 1:39am — omnesole
7 December 2004 - 2:00pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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Very interesting poem...

30 April 2003 - 12:15pm — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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Putting this poem to the beat, slapping of Patty Cake Patty Cake is genius. The slapping, beating sounds captures what she's doing to you as you're fighting back, but realizing you're defeated because you can't control your own emotions. I really do hope you decide to be published or publish your own book because the more I read of your work the more clear it becomes of your wonderful talent.

23 March 2003 - 9:31pm — Hollee Brinlee (not verified)
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beautifully put, i feel the pain