Fairytale Shmairytale

You can hold the world

in your hands

and let everything go

in a second



You can fall in love

in 21 days

and fall out even

quicker then you thought



You can try to tell me

you love me

But even God himself

wont hear you tonight



You can cry your tears

and remind me

Why i love you with

everything i have



You can beg me to stay

but i forget

That in the end of everything

Its not a fairytale ending

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Afzal Shauq's picture

its a good poem friend with rich idea and perfectly done in sweet way..impressive and heart catchy..even heart touching too... means you are a good poet... wish you write more and more...hope you will also go through my poems and you will like them...your comments will be respected and added to my new book if you wish...I am basically known as (peace wisher poet) with 6 book published and all are online... let me share with you one of my famous say regarding peace...((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...Afzal Shauq ))) hope you like my work too...its my birthday and my best friends are wishing me poems of friendship... be a good friend too

Josh Glasgow's picture

You can fall in love
in 21 days
and fall out even
quicker then you thought

You can try to tell me
you love me
But even God himself
wont hear you tonight

What you write.. is so easily easily understood. Felt, and betrayed. Like smoke. Great writing.