You can hold the world
in your hands
and let everything go
in a second
You can fall in love
in 21 days
and fall out even
quicker then you thought
You can try to tell me
you love me
But even God himself
wont hear you tonight
You can cry your tears
and remind me
Why i love you with
everything i have
You can beg me to stay
but i forget
That in the end of everything
Its not a fairytale ending
its a good poem friend with rich idea and perfectly done in sweet way..impressive and heart catchy..even heart touching too... means you are a good poet... wish you write more and more...hope you will also go through my poems and you will like them...your comments will be respected and added to my new book if you wish...I am basically known as (peace wisher poet) with 6 book published and all are online... let me share with you one of my famous say regarding peace...((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...Afzal Shauq ))) hope you like my work too...its my birthday and my best friends are wishing me poems of friendship... be a good friend too
You can fall in love
in 21 days
and fall out even
quicker then you thought
You can try to tell me
you love me
But even God himself
wont hear you tonight
What you write.. is so easily easily understood. Felt, and betrayed. Like smoke. Great writing.