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i'm cut



i'm torn



i'm broken



unwhole



i'm fragile



i'm breakable



i'm valuable



shatterable



i'm tiny



i'm weak



i'm tired



untouchable



i'm pure



i'm clean



i'm fresh



hang me out to dry





hate the way these tunr out

they're just for my own entertainment

reaching a goal i think i can reach

just let me be in my fun

my unquestioned sanity and reliable soul

oh baby talkt o me, oh baby can't you see

your hurting me ripping me apart

you stole my breath, along with my heart

just your average girl

not meant to be broken

but not meant to be untouched

i give up on this

i give up on people..

i just wanna give up

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ugh, somebody just put me out ofm y misery and dontl et me write anymore

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©21 July 2002 - 10:14am — oh_so_odd
20 November 2002 - 11:21am — Abbey Reeder (not verified)
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kind of a sad poem. i really like it but its kind of sad, but i guess i shouldn't talk because i put myself down a lot too. you are a great and awesome writer so don't ever give up on writing. keep the faith and things will get better in all due time.

22 July 2002 - 11:26am — Marianne Chrisos (not verified)
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weeeeeee i know what you mean. but i love you.

22 July 2002 - 3:38am — Josh Glasgow (not verified)
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my unquestioned sanity

nice line.