HATE

Stabbed in the back

over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again!!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

its not a poem get over it

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If it weren't for all those exclamation marks, and the last two lines there..though I tend to agree with you.. still, it seemed to me like that took away from it. It's a good concept though. Good work.