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Late Heavy Hitter
First to break through the cloud
Reason to lift these eyes
Finally opened wide
Becoming a young man
No gloss running across
Forced t9 be boss
So I can show how much I adore this whore
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1st time I wrote it without any chnages
First to break through to me
Reasons to lift my eyes
Opened them wide (1st: for the first time)(2nd:, never done this before)
Since beoming a young man
No gloss running across anymore
Except the glossinees from this adore
should have
Just put this in the comment box that comes with when you are writing the poem but this seens easier now.
Anyway yeah first poem about love. Most of the others I guess were just about the feels after loves left but I think I might stick to the positive now it feels better and maybe it will help draw real love toward me