in this moment,i am happy
everything has settled down
the weight on my sholder isnt as heavy as before
at least not for now
in my lifetime,i have felt this load
pulling me,pushing me down
try not to think of how i truly feel inside
try to pull the plug on the doubt
i want this to last forever
this feeling i cant deny
somehow the pieces are fitting together
the best day of my life
in this moment,i am hopefull
ive lost myself in the crowd
the rains not pouring down on me for once
im dreaming,i hope ill never be found
in this moment i am happy
everything has settled down
the weight on my back is finally starrting to come down
but its just a dream
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