When I look in your eyes, boy, I see.
The reflection of myself as an example of purity
I am untouched-
I hold the sanctified places
Where you neither come nor go-
Nor know
Of all my faces.
Of where I have been
Or of what I have seen
You may enter,
But I am detached from your so called
Reality
And render you meaningless
To me.
As thin as sand
When I am the sea.
Crashing, and flowing
Rising, and blowing
I lift myself above the ash you make of me.
very nice! I liked this piece a lot.
very nice imagery and rhythm.
I like the meter changes works out nicely, I know meanings of poems are very personal. This one seems very personal. I can't quite grasp the full meaning and I don't really think its meant for me to.
You should feel proud of this.
Clay