A Vision

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Don’t want too see this through your eyes

Your own vision of me

So tell me what you wish was there

And what you really see.



Do you really care at all

Or are your words just simply words

Because I know I’m not your first love

Nor you’re second or you’re third.



I tried so hard to understand

Why you just fall into the line

Take this bull from all the others

Who just may care your love is mine.



I never pictured this

The love I need not there for me

When I feared my heart had broken

You hurt me worse but didn’t see.



I would never cause you pain

It would hurt me just to try

It really hurt’s to say this

But I really don’t want to lie.


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Rick Patneaude's picture

Wow, so far i'm off to a good start reading your poems, it was very kickass. i definately felt an emotion transfer when i read this; this situation is very similar to one i experienced not too long ago, so i hear you. very awesome word choice, and perfect flow. i love it

RICK

running_with_rabbits's picture

meh


Much Love

Ashley