Distance

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I hate the way i'm feeling

the way I always feel

the day is slowly fading

I wish it wasn't real.



I wonder wher i'm going

I've cut the strings again

and all I need is distance

I will be back though not sure when.






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Afzal Shauq's picture

well done my best friend...really inspiring and rich the way you did... you are making me think of your ideas...and wish to appreciate you much that your sweet words on my poems and if you do as a whole remarks on my whole poetry in few pages...that will be added to my bew book under your name and picture and much thanks.... yours friend

Belinda Taylor's picture

everyone needs distance. trust me.... take my work for it. and no one likes to be alone, its a scarey world and everyone needs someone to hold on to.
luv ya hun
Belinda

running_with_rabbits's picture

I love it all save for the last line coz its to wordy

It is just how I feel right now

I am morbid, and down and angery.... :( I don't want to be alone right now :(

ash


Much Love

Ashley