You want to know the thing to do
to make me feel alright
well please don't bother worrying
i'm angry out of spite.
You wan't to hear the reason
why my eyes are sporting tears
but I don't think you understand
and that's what I do most fear.
You've always had that something
that makes them bow down on their knees
and that includes the one I wanted
though you never were a tease.
I have loved him ten years or more
maybe not as long as you
but I think that it was just as deep
although you won't see that as true.
He looks at me oblivious
to the feelings I display
I think he knows well how I feel
but for sure he will not say.
You've had him once and then again
and again you will somehow
no actress could have pulled it off
so please do take a bow.
So I hope you get together
though I doubt that it will last
then he can remember the good old friend
he had a chance with in the past.
nice rhyme....i asume those are your feelings.....and i like that in a poem so....hmm...i liked it...nice work
My boyfriend's ex has been trying to lure him back after we've lived together for 13 years so this is something I can relate to. Great idea for a poem. However, it might read more smoothly if in the eighth line you omitted the word "do". In the tenth line you may want to consider "that brings them to their knees". And in the eleventh line you might try "my one desire".
hey....i feel ya pain....out!
sabrina
what i most fear
do does not fit
and nice nikki
real nice
ash
Much Love
Ashley