When I let go to search for something
to find some meaning to this life
lost it all to find nothing
but this un-belated strife.
Gave up the things that meant the most
for a vision of better days
now I have nothing to lose
no matter what you say.
It's far too late
i'm too far gone
so close your eyes
it won't be long.
I never broke
a single heart
and it's too bad
I have to start.
hmmm so logical, true , heart catchy poems is this... wow love it very much ... thanks dear friend for your greta words on my poems too... you seem to me the best friend I ever got being true poetess... hope we keep in touch and do comments to share knowledge... hey , your poems are really soooo impressive...
This would sound wonderful as a song, especially that last stanza. It's really catchy for some reason.
Hey! I love this poem. It is so well written, and expresses all your thoughts and feelings extremely well. I understand completly how you fell.
i love it
its so me :(
ash
Much Love
Ashley
Very nice piece. Thank you for sharing.