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A Cold Winter
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closet boxes 2002 If I decided to say goodbye
would you notice that i'm gone
would you realize i'm not happy
or that anything was wrong.
Would you see the things I want in life
won't work around you own
are you willing to live without me
all alone within your home.
To lay alone on winter nights
a cold winter for you
so when I come to say goodbye
please tell me what you'll do.
phil-carcione@attbi.com
I've read several of your poems and had trouble deciding which one I should comment on. You write some wonderful stuff!
This is the one I liked the best from what I read. This like most of your work seems to come from your heart. That's always the sign of a good poet. If your write from your heart and soul you can't go wrong.
Keep up the good work!
~Phil~
Nice write. The opening lines reminded me of an old Superdrag song..."Look around, would it bring somebody down if I never made a sound again?"
i like it hun
tho right now it seems to me like tellin someone off coz thats what i wnat to do
ash
Much Love
Ashley
I would notice if you were gone and I would cry for hours if you left
I like the poem
Brandon