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It's Not Alright
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closet boxes 2002 I'll never know where I could have been
if I had just let go
I'll never see behind your eyes
easy imitations of lies
yet we all seem to know
This isn't okay
It was never okay
you were the final blow.
Nameless people count the time
conform and just bow down
not knowing who they really are
their arms are tightly bound.
The situation casts a pall
on weary, shadowed lives
while fate in all her silver robes
does throw her piercing knives.
I'll never see the way you do
and I don't want to try
the questions all do start with why
but they are never answered
nor are they really ever asked
this isn't right
it's not alright
to forget the past.
i don't really like the rhyming you use here but its not all that bad, its just me
hehe this line rocks
"while fate in all her silver robes"
but the rest is still kinda meh
ash
Much Love
Ashley