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Inside of the Dark
I thought up this song here
inside of the dark,
but know not the way here
to reach someone's heart.
Just feelings in flowing,
so I wrote them down.
No starlight in glowing
could bring me around.
Guess nothing's been clear here,
since fell out the dream.
What once could appear here,
no more is it seen.
Just distant reflections
that once shined for free.
In hindsight spring waters
I still come to see.
I thought up this song here
inside of the dark,
but know not the way here
to reach someone's heart.
I think with your poetry
I think with your poetry you will reach their heart. Very nice, neat poem entertaining read and enjoyable. Liked your rhyming.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you so much...
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and considerate comments. I sincerely appreciate your kind words on this, as well as the time you took to read my work. I'm just glad that you enjoyed my poem, and came to view it in a positive, worthwhile way. It also means a lot to me to find that you liked my rhyming. Just sorry that it took me so long to respond to your warm critique, but I wasn't aware of this until just recently. Thank you again, and take care.
Sincerely,
New_Wave_Franky
March 22, 2014.