girl in the shadows

not a full-blown stoner...

but she likes to taste the earth.

not a full-blown lover...

but she made myself her first.



she's a girl in the shadows

...but she shines just like the sun.

she's a girl in the shadows

...with the daylight on her tongue.



not a full-blown teaser...

but she likes to make and run.

not a full-blown pleaser...

but you know that's what she's done.



she's a girl in the shadows

...but she travels with the sun.

she'a girl in the shadows

...with love's flowers on the run.



she's a vixen's love,

awaiting the stardust.

i'm a "wanna be"

visionary artist.

she's a vixen, love

awaiting the star's dust.

i'm a visionary

"wanna be" artist.



Not a full-blown stoner...

but she likes to tuck the earth.

Not a full-blown lover...

but she made the wine her thirst.



she's a vixen's love,

awaiting her artist.

i'm a "wanna be",

fixed on the stardust.

she's a vixen, love,

awaiting her artist.

i'm a "wanna be"

fix on her stardust.



she's a girl in the shadows...with love's powers on the drum.

She's a girl in the shadows...with the rays here at her tongue.

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again I loved this poem! the whole flow, rhythm, and wording. I really liked this bit:

"she's a girl in the shadows
...but she shines just like the sun.
she's a girl in the shadows
...with the daylight on her tongue."

and I LOVED how you interchanged "wanna be" visionary artist and visionary "wanna be" artist!

thanks for such a good read
much love
ash


Much Love

Ashley