soo true and lovely idea and the plea you did here is really a wonderful and heartfelt one.. yea very impressive poem..enjoyed alot and read three time and felt like its touching my soul..my innerself..well done dear poetess and hope your heart and soul is touched by my poetry..that will be my luck>>>>>>>
1 March 2004 - 10:31pm — Ann Maretta (not verified)
In your works, the lack of punctuation tends to make each poem a continuous metaphor. In viewing them this way they become quite complex. At the same time, each separate image is simple and beautiful.
soo true and lovely idea and the plea you did here is really a wonderful and heartfelt one.. yea very impressive poem..enjoyed alot and read three time and felt like its touching my soul..my innerself..well done dear poetess and hope your heart and soul is touched by my poetry..that will be my luck>>>>>>>
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In your works, the lack of punctuation tends to make each poem a continuous metaphor. In viewing them this way they become quite complex. At the same time, each separate image is simple and beautiful.