The Shine of the Forest

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In your eyes

The shine of the forest

Under the sun

In your eyes

A mysterious ways of sad

In your eyes

A fog prevents me from the sight

Alone in your forests

Losed between your mysteries

Lead me to the way, strange.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

soo true and lovely idea and the plea you did here is really a wonderful and heartfelt one.. yea very impressive poem..enjoyed alot and read three time and felt like its touching my soul..my innerself..well done dear poetess and hope your heart and soul is touched by my poetry..that will be my luck>>>>>>>

poetvg's picture

I LOVE THIS PIECE

Ann Maretta's picture

In your works, the lack of punctuation tends to make each poem a continuous metaphor. In viewing them this way they become quite complex. At the same time, each separate image is simple and beautiful.