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SORRY JUST DOESNT SEEM TO BE GOOD ENOUGH

WHAT DO YOU SAY TO SOMEONE ......A FRIEND

WHO HAS LOST SOMEONE SO DEAR

DEATH'S  DOORS SEEMED  SO FAR AWAY

YET THEY ARE  SO VERY NEAR



MEMORIES OF A TIME GONE BY......FILLED  WITH HAPPINESS

AND YET HERE AND NOW, TODAY IS SO FULL OF PAIN AND SADNESS.



THOUGHTS OF A SMILE AND A RADIANT FACE

A BEAUTY THAT DULLED EVEN THE DAWNING OF THE SUN  

DEATH IS SO QUIET AND SEEMS SO VERY STILL

LIKEN TO THE SILENCE WHICH FOLLOWS THE FIRING OF A GUN



SORRY YET SORRY JUST DOESN'T SEEM TO BE  GOOD ENOUGH

SORRY IS THE ONLY WORD, BUT OH LORD IT SEEMS  SO ROUGH



EMOTIONS RUN AS DEEP AS AN OCEAN...A PIT OF SORROW OVERFLOWS

NO ONE REALLY KNOWS WHAT TO DO OR SAY

AND THE WIND WEEPS.......AS A ROSE IS PLACED UPON HER GRAVE

AND ALL THAT CAN BE SAID IS SORRY, SORRY, SORRY ON SUCH A DAY


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I couldn't help myself this is the same poem as my SORRY it was done with a dear friend who reined me in while working on SORRY hehe ....but I cut the reigns and allowed my pen to flow without restraint this time around!...Death is so very sad...and to those left behind sorry truly doesn't seem to be enough..sorrow what a deal

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©8 October 2001 - 4:39pm — mwhatim
13 September 2013 - 10:43am — a.griffiths57
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Sorry

 

 

Your poem is so heartfelt and so straight forward. As you say it's so awkward to sum up death and the loss it leaves in others . A good poem I enjoyed reading it.

 

 

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9 October 2001 - 4:39pm — deal (not verified)
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Hey kid some deal's arnt what they seem sorry