Without You

Your look excites me

Your touch intoxicates me

Your smell arouses me

Your taste seduces me



I want to see you

I want to feel you

I want to smell you

I want to taste you



Together we see the beauty around us

Apart we only feel the sorrows of yesterday

Alone the smell of despair is all around us

As one we breathe fresh air into a sad existence



Without you I can not see the sun

Without you I only feel my broken heart

Without you the roses have no scent

Without you I can not taste the sweetness of life

Author's Notes/Comments: 

love if we are lucky enough can make one feel complete!

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deal's picture

I think but there is no thought I feel but without feelings I try to love but what is love I try to answer but don't no the question When I was young these left me Through no act of my own I lost them or where they taken from me To give you an answer I only give questions DEAL.

Wendy D' Michelle's picture

I like this one a lot. Very good. I can see what ya mean about love. :) Wendy

Doug Clinton's picture

Seems as we might share a great deal. Love has given us all we want, left us out in the cold, torn our heart to pieces, given more joy than we can convey, and all in between. I think I'm going to be glad we "met". I could feel every word as I read them and I know you could as they flowed so freely from your mind... Doug