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12 points

Streaking cross a sodden sky
ionic sheath home defied
piercing whistle as I travel
to my destination
on the backs of thundercats
sonic wall falling back
cloaking my arrival in
silent desolation.
pin your ears back bare your fangs
electric whirlwind thoughts derranged
slicing open puffy wounds
to show them to the sun
dripping dry into the soil
his master plan to catch me foiled
nestle in the sodded cracks
wait patiently for dawn
thunder spear splits the dome
throwing shocks of scorched loam
cracks a panicked cranium
shocks me to the core
godly power in my veins
oldest enemy pulls the strings
urging me to move so quickly
to your rusted door
shake and squirm till the strings tangle
he's been attacked at every angle
yet his foxhole remains unbreached
a mocking gaping maw.
the only way is from inside
to wear his oily, stinking hide
and carry it upon my back
until I find his flaw.

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I love the whole assortment

I love the whole assortment of olours so far! Wonderful writes! Each one has a lovely quirky surprise! Never a miss cause I'd be remiss to miss ones like this! Cheers mrpoofs!


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ashes_theartofburning's picture

Whew!

Shit.
What a ride.
Your 12 points are a stimulus read.
It's like sitting down and writing everything that comes to mind.
No interruption.
You succeed flawlessly.
Wonderful job!
^_^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo