Doorway

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I'm standing in the door way,
you don't see me.
The bathroom is foggy and steamy,
not from anything we did.
You squeak a hole in the foggy mirror
and analyse your face.
Brushing your wet hair in to
railway tracks down to your nape,
your pecs are tightening as you
brush; and you notice them suddenly you
stop just to tweak and admire them.
Now the arms flexing, the shaver comes out,
the cologne... Plucking nose hair...
I stare and roll my eyes...
What the fuck for wanker?
You see, I'm not going anywhere,
he's going to work
dressed like Tom Fuck.
We went out for coffee yesterday,
you just pulled on old jeans and red shirt.
Some unlucky piece of ass got you
tied up in knots.
You didnt take your sunglasses off once...
I looked across the street where Fernando stood in the doorway of a book shop.
Waiting for an excuse to rummage through old books with him behind me
brushing his pocket full of "happy to see me" across my ass.
I smile,"Hey! There's a new book out, 50 Shades of Grey...
I think I might check it out, you stay.
Call me when the coffee is here okay?"
"Dumb fuck!" I mutter as I walk through the doorway...

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nightlight1220's picture

This is some funny sh*t. I

This is some funny sh*t. I love Fernando and his "pocket full of happy to see me brushed acreoss my ass".  Across your and obviously right under Rico Swave's 'blind eyes'. Oh, but they're always so sorry when the fire goes out... Love this. It's got great attitude.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Moonshadow's picture

Well thankyou very much

Well thankyou very much Nightlight1220! I am very happy to see that you enjoyed my little pocket of life from the asshole chapters LOL! ;)


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

mrpoofs's picture

lol. Tom Fuck. never heard

lol. Tom Fuck. never heard that one before. gonna start usin it. interestingly real. nice write!

Moonshadow's picture

Haha! Tom Fuck is a guy who

Haha! Tom Fuck is a guy who loves himself more than dick or hairy! ;) glad you liked! Its a play on Tom cat... pussy... fuck...ect 


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

WTF!? this is awesome! I love

WTF!? this is awesome! I love it! You are one talented observational my friend! I just didnt expect that ending!!! I could relate very much to some of this! Great write! I am officially a fan! :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

AW Thanks Ssmoothie!!!

I am a fan of yours too! As if you couldn't tell! LOL "D! You made my day!!!! I am extatic!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

Youre always welcome :)

hugSS!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ashes_twisted's picture

In agreement with smoothie.

What the fuck for wanker?
You see, I'm not going anywhere,
he's going to work
dressed like Tom Fuck.
We went out for coffee yesterday,
You just pulled on old jeans and red shirt.
Some unlucky piece of ass got you tied up in knots.
You didnt take your sunglasses off once...

Geez it's like we were dating the same guy.
I love this!!
Brilliant!


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Moonshadow's picture

Aw!!! Thankyou so much Ashes

Aw!!! Thankyou so much Ashes Twisted!!! A great writer like you, I am honored! Let's have a pity party and dump them both on their ASSESS! "D lol! If only they didn't have any redeeming qualities... like great uh well sort of great... uh let me think about that one a bit more! He he! "j


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

ashes_twisted's picture

Redeeming qualities.

Would be how the door smacked his ass on the way out.
Hard, and with a vengeance!
^_^
I wish I thought of this poem..
Your the one who is great!


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Moonshadow's picture

Wow Ashes!

I don't know what to say! Thank you! "D Perhaps next time we will kiss frogs instead of toads and find a couple of princes under rocks? Lol!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

Beavis's picture

The ladies are correct! This

The ladies are correct! This is excellent! I can't wait to read more!

Moonshadow's picture

Thanks Beavis!

I'm really starting to like you alot! ") I value your opinion because I also really like your work! "J


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow