My Sweet Mother

My Sweet mother,

The woman who gave me birth,

Channel of my existence,

Who carried me in her womb,

Nine months  of stress and discomfort,

My queen, greatest of all women,

Who endured the pains of labour,

Hours of labour and travail,

Just to make sure I was born.



My sweet mother,

Most precious among women,

who brought me up,

Bearing with my naughtiness, my Pee and poo,

She showed me the ways of God, and of life,

Till I became a man, able to make my own decisions

I shall ever appreciate that.



My sweet mother,

Most adorable of all women,

Full of wisdom and warmth

Desirable, dependable,

Most courageous, wonderful,

beautiful like the stars of the sky,

strong as the pillars of the temple,

Her love is a covering, for me!

My sweet mother, I love U


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written on mother's day 2004. I love U mom.you are really the greatest of all women to me!

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prboggs's picture

I would love for my son to raise a tribute to me like this one you have done for your mother!


Always love unconditionally without reason, and may you give without taking. Abundant Love, Peace, Hugs, Kisses, Joy, and most of all Faith are yours!!!

Pauletta Ruby Boggs

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

wow that is so beautiful and I wish more sons felt that of their moms. I too am a mom, have two kids Heatherdawn age 27 shortly before xmas this year and Stephen 25. Im 50