life what is this torment
death tearing away our sanity
my soul carries on
through the shadows
this ocean of lies
in the dark im hideing
waiting for this war to end
but waiting is a burdon my heart cant carry
tearing inside of me i push on through the plague of shadows
time slipping slowly
but my mind a blure
unsertainty bleeding through my cursed vanes
my body cries in pain
but these cries are silent
carrying on pushing forward
moveing on through the dark abyess
rideing on the road to trimph
fury of hell to halt this journey
we will soon reach the hour with the power of light
spilling blood for the righteous
this glory will be mine
into the fire my travels take me
the fury of the storm
worse then i imagined
slowly walking through
i thought my emptyness would carry on
liveing my days in lonlyness
fighting the tears
i spill the blood of the masses
what will i have to do to end this sorrow
carrying on pushing forward
moveing on through the dark abyess
rideing on the road to trimph
fury of hell to halt this journey
we will soon reach the hour with the power of light
spilling blood for the righteous
this glory will be mine
lost in the blank eyes
defending the wholesome dreams
fighting them off
but my sword is usless
there will be no peace
untill the hate surenders
that day will never come
but i fight for the good
giveing hope to mankind
i watch as the masses cry out
when will this end
fordgeing forward prepared for anything i find
dark rain thunder and destruction of humanity
suerender is no possible
now prepare for war
carrying on pushing forward
moveing on through the dark abyess
rideing on the road to trimph
fury of hell to halt this journey
we will soon reach the hour with the power of light
spilling blood for the righteous
this glory will be mine
i liked this and no it's not dorky it's actually very well written. your style and writing abitlites have come along way. i like the dark deep almost demented nature of this one.
wow very... disturbing lol, but still truely great, i love how u write, n this one iz...well definatly...disturbed, but itz still good, and yeah i agree with molly, u realy have come ALONG way with ur writeing