what is this feeling
this feeling inside of me
so far from hate
leaving me speechless
is this what i think
no this cant happen
at least not to me
why cant this go away
(these feelings for you)
what am i feeling inside
(im feeling for you)
who ever thought id feel this way
(never i thought ever)
but i seem to feel this way
some one thats there
through good times and bad
all the smiles and tears
every breathe of air
filled with happyness
for this one person
could it really be...
why cant this go away
(these feelings for you)
what am i feeling inside
(im feeling for you)
who ever thought id feel this way
(never i thought ever)
but i seem to feel this way
i never thought life could be this good
the plusses so many
takeing eachday alone nevermore
in this fight with a friend
how could it be
some one who sees the real me
never again will i look back and cry
never again will i wish this death
never again will i take life for grantid
how much i thank everything for all ive been given
an angel forever how could this be given
given to a abomonation such as myself
i dont question
i just know ur from heaven
why cant this go away
(these feelings for you)
what am i feeling inside
(im feeling for you)
who ever thought id feel this way
(never i thought ever)
but i seem to feel this way
but it really is this is love
Wow this is so stunning to me, you have such an amazing talent and it shines through in your writing. When I read this poem, i think its to me, and that is how it is supposed to feel to a reader.
-An Old Friend
phil...i really like this but i really don't kno what to say about it lol i'm at a loss for words because now..I KNOW WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT! but....you just have to keep looking ahead and remember i kno that you are a great person you just have to let people come through and see you for you...always remember i'm your friend and you can always talk to me about anything :)
-LauraT
WHAT IS THIS ABOUT?OR SHOULD I SAY WHO? ANY WAYS IT'S GOOD JUST A FEW SPELLING ERRORS ADN WORDING CHANGES MIGHT BE GOOD BUT I LIKE THE CONCEPT.