"a relief"

i thought i'm dead,

as long as i wondered,



am i alive?

or have i dieD?

i thought;

when i gave my life,

i died inside..



there's no escape

i no more dream

i no more cry

i no more weep!

im so empty as it seems!

it could be my funeral,

but it also is; my relief!



its a relief

i no more love him

as i've never begun!



he maybe was someone to love,

but i no more feel him,

he was never mine!



gaining back, my beliefe

the true love of mine,

remains unknown!



nov-05

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Afzal Shauq's picture

its a good poem and very intersting ... start from your own to the endless enternal life in different indications... love this poem and I went through few of your more poems too and liked them... hope my poetry and work will also be impressive to your heart..basically i am a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and soon the 7th will be in hand and thats contained on the critiques of worldwide poets about my poetry and will be publsihed in Canada soon...