i thought i'm dead,
as long as i wondered,
am i alive?
or have i dieD?
i thought;
when i gave my life,
i died inside..
there's no escape
i no more dream
i no more cry
i no more weep!
im so empty as it seems!
it could be my funeral,
but it also is; my relief!
its a relief
i no more love him
as i've never begun!
he maybe was someone to love,
but i no more feel him,
he was never mine!
gaining back, my beliefe
the true love of mine,
remains unknown!
nov-05
its a good poem and very intersting ... start from your own to the endless enternal life in different indications... love this poem and I went through few of your more poems too and liked them... hope my poetry and work will also be impressive to your heart..basically i am a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and soon the 7th will be in hand and thats contained on the critiques of worldwide poets about my poetry and will be publsihed in Canada soon...