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i wanna live forever~

if you'll be with me,

but without you in my life,

i dont wanna live at all!

you are the reason for me to live,

you are the one who took control!



you made me love,

you made me fall,

you made me give,

my heart you stole!



i was happy~

you touched my soul!

today i'm not~

you killed it all!!



time had died~

when i was dead!

i was blind~

now i'm depressed!

my heart was filled~

with soreful tears,

i try too hard not to shed~

and everytme, i smile instead!



THE END

3\1\2005

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i believe i was totally depressed when i wrote this,,, all i know is that i'm not as depressed as today... i guess the way i feel now is just too bad,, its the worst mood that i even\r reached!
whatever..life just SUX!

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©19 July 2005 - 2:05pm — Free_Spirit
20 July 2005 - 1:57am — honey811
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I really like your tecnque of writing. I read this was along time agao and I do feel like life sucks at times.
keep up writing.

19 July 2005 - 2:46pm — Coral Walker (not verified)
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This is a great poem,
and oddly enough,
I know what its like.
I am usually a bit on the depressed side when I write,
so my stuff does end up like this.
But once again I'll tell you this is an awesome poem,
keep it up.