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Opposite Universe
This is the last time
So take it with all you got
You won't be seeing me again
You'll be the memory I've already forgot
You're just a dream I'll never see again
You're just a word I'll never say
You'll be the wind I never felt
You'll be the path that never led the way
This is the last time
So if you want to hold me, you better do it tight
You won't be touching me again
You'll be the wrong that I never got right
You'll be a scream that I never heard
You'll be a tear that I never cried
You'll be the star I'll never see
You're just a ghost that never died
This is the last time
So you'll kiss me goodbye
You won't be tasting me again
You're just a tune that was never my lullaby
i like this. i feel your pain though. to Love someone enough to let them have their way for the last time when most people would just walk away is hard, to say the least. it says alot for your respect for this person. i liked this poem. it kept me wanting to read more. good job!
Your writing has an extremely catchy way about it; as if it could be a song if applied the right way. I like it, and I shall keep on reading.