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Love poems I act like a bitch sometimes,
Treat you like shit,
And push you away,
But i need you.
I lock myself in my bedroom,
Isolate myself from everyone,
And keep my distance,
But i need you.
I may be thoughtless,
Act really childish,
And immature,
But i need you.
I need you because i love you,
Because i can't live without you,
Because you're my shoulder to cry on
I act stupid,
Crazy and random,
Im naive and sometimes foolish,
But i love you.
I'm sometimes ungrateful,
Really moody,
And horrible to you,
But i love you.
I push you away,
Tell you to leave me alone,
And that i'm fine without you,
But i love you.
I'm an idiot, i know
I say stupid things, i know
I hurt you, i know
But i also care for you, you know
Im always here for you, you know
And most importantly,
I'll never leave you, i hope you know <3
Hello, this was honest and
Hello, this was honest and direct. I did not like the use of "idiot" twice. Try changing one of those to -
irrational, reckless, thoughtless, ridiculous, or unwise. Something else to say you "can be" short-tempered, grumpy, unstable, and tempermental at times. Oh, but how I love those tough, robust changes in a woman's personality. They can make a man hot. Just be who you are. Nice read.
Haha thank you for the
Haha thank you for the comment :) and i changed it!
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein
nice one:)
nice one:)
Thanks :)
Thanks :)
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein
Very relatable piece, we're
Very relatable piece, we're often the worst to the ones we love. You should remedy that though, everyone is temporary and their the one's we regret being mean to when they're gone.
Work on metaphors in your writing, try and paint pictures with words out of the emotions and message you're trying to deliver. It actually makes things even more relatable because people always paint themselves in when reading something. =]
Thanks and i'll try to do
Thanks and i'll try to do that next time :)
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein
Don't Push To Hard
I keep pushing as if the world
is waiting for my bruised hands
to correct the love I feel
but never demonstrate
with words or kisses
only pushes.
I know you know there is love
here to be known because
I am attached to you like
light to a turned on bulb
like blue to summer sky
stars to clear night as if
there was no one else
in the world but you
next to me impossible
to push away.
Tryi it with a paint brush so we can see it! - Lady A
Okay, i'll try to do that
Okay, i'll try to do that next time but it might not be that good as its not how i usually write
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein