"You Said"

You said you liked me

And I believed it

But now I see

You didn’t mean it

 

 

You said you love me

And I believed it

But now I see

You didn’t mean it

 

 

You said we’ll be forever

And I believed it

But now I see

You didn’t mean it

 

 

Now you say we’ve grown apart

But I don’t want to believe it

Because you said

We’ll be forever.

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Raven1199's picture

nice poem

I can relate to your poem.....in so many ways

allets's picture

Nice Progression In Oppositions

Nice admixture of believability and unbelievability makes for an ironic ending. Well penned. 


 

 

S74RW4RD's picture

I like the subtle alterations

I like the subtle alterations in the first lines of each stanza.


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