{Revision}
My head on your chest, I hear the beat
Reminding me lover, we are complete
I wish you could see it, how happy I am
Somehow, I think, you could understand
Every time that you find me
I feel it sparking, sincere
Envelop me in it, whenever your near
I know that you love me
I feel that you care
I wonder, if ever, I'll stop walking on air
With you I'm not broken, I'm all that I am
Let's keep this forever, I don't give a damn
{Original}
I lay me head on your chest just to listen to your heart beat
it reminds me how much i love you and how you make me complete
oh how i wish you could see how happy you make me
but somehow i think you understand
because every time you take my hand
i feel something special, I feel something sincere
it's something i feel whenever your near
and somehow i know you love me
and i definitely know you care
still i can't help feel like I'm walking on air
because with you I'm not broken, you love all i am
I really like this poem...probably b/c I know exactly what you mean and how you feel
Who else would it be too...hmmm...god? Maybe god wonts some loving. Maybe he's lonely! But...seriously...I'm just gods little play thing right now so he can smite me if he wants to. Good for you and your boyfriend.
thats cute i love the way it flows and it makes me sad ... hes lucky thats all i have to say