My Minds Blank
My Hearts Sank
I'm Lost But Found
I Still feel Bound
My Life Racing Through My Mind
I Can See But Yet I'm Blind
I'm Running This Race
I Loose You I Can't Face
I'll Run Across The Nations
For You Are My Temptaions
There's A Love I Feel
But Yet I Sit Still
My Mind Is Fired
But My Body, Tired
I See You Sigh
Please Just Let Me Die
Your Taken
My Hearts Breakin
I Start To Cry
I Wish To Die
For The Numbers Won't Equal Two
Cause I'll Never Have You!
I'll never have you
the phrasing in your poem is well done. This is an excellent write. sad and emotional.
But don't give up hope. one + one does equal two. Maybe she is taken today, but
no one knows what will happen tomorrow. Keep up the nice writing.
Let me just say one thing please. I have noticed each sentence is in upper case letters.
how about trying only the first letter as upper case. I believe it will be better presented.
heather
...i kno the feeling.
Me too....
Me too....