I swear Im not crazy
My words just aapear hazy
because you lack the intelgence
It takes to comprehend
SO listen to me talk
While you just stand there and gawk
I knew you couldnt keep up
So just go ahead and quite
Darling when it comes to this game
Ill put you to shame
Because no one can play insane
Better then me
Hi,
I really liked this poem. It reminds me of me, and of a few friends of mine. :)
~angel
This is a really beautiful poem and I like what you had to say in this piece!! It's really awesome!!=)
challenging...maybe i should try to beat you w/the insanity...lol.....like the poem....very good....you should write more on here.
Another great poem, the emotions in your poems are so clearly felt. Beautiful.
If you don't Passionatly defend your freedom, every waking moment of your life, at every possible opportunity, you never deserved it.
love your work thanks for the good words :)