Believe

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Religous

Tell me

I was never alone

That through it all

You were by my side

That not even for a second

Did you leave me?

That you were here to carry me

Along this path

Of broken glass

Tell me you will

Carry me

When I cannot stand

That you will believe in e

Even if I don’t believe

In myself...

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phil_carcione's picture

Of all the one I've read I liked this one the best.

Kris McConnachie's picture

Moving peace, you give off some great subtle emotion.
I thought that line, "That you will believe in me Even if I don’t believe In myself..." was very beautiful.

Clarity Jones's picture

Great poem. There's a couple gramatical errors that need corrected but the poem is really beautiful.

Rogers McDonald's picture

I really like this, keep up the good work