Tell me
I was never alone
That through it all
You were by my side
That not even for a second
Did you leave me?
That you were here to carry me
Along this path
Of broken glass
Tell me you will
Carry me
When I cannot stand
That you will believe in e
Even if I don’t believe
In myself...
Of all the one I've read I liked this one the best.
Moving peace, you give off some great subtle emotion.
I thought that line, "That you will believe in me Even if I don’t believe In myself..." was very beautiful.
Great poem. There's a couple gramatical errors that need corrected but the poem is really beautiful.
I really like this, keep up the good work