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The rain falls down, hitting the ground as it sings a song.
A song about the hopes and dreams of a girl, who wasn't quite sure of herself in this world.
All around her landscapes of beauty, unveiled for her eyes to see.
Her soul is floating by, in the sky, she's trying to grab her dreams as they float on by.

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This is my first time posting poems for review. Please be honest and tell me what you think!! I am really excited to share my poetry and hear some feedback. Thanks everyone!! I will be uploading a photo soon.

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©14 March 2012 - 10:36pm — lkline
15 March 2012 - 1:09am — Fitzgerald
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This is a fantastic write. I

This is a fantastic write. I hope to read many more.

15 March 2012 - 1:26am — lkline
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Thanks so much! I just

Thanks so much! I just started on this site, so I still have to read other people's poems. I will be sure to check your's out. Thanks again for the feedback, it means a lot!

Leslie

15 March 2012 - 2:36am — Fitzgerald
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Of course. Keep writing and

Of course. Keep writing and I'll keep reading