Wet Wishes, Dry Ashes

"Wet Wishes, Dry Ashes"   3 - 4 - 05



drip, drip, drop the droplets fall

echoing off the ceramic walls

the candle burning at both ends

a despairing, lonely friend



the light, it's slowly fading

his will's with it, falling

his heart's no longer in the race

slowing to a comfortable pace



the glimmering pupils holding onto life

the wincing pain from the mental bites

shining once more into the flame

then shutting his eyes out of shame



the flame is burning bright

valiantly it sheds its light

but it's burning much too fast

such intensity before the crash



his eyes opening once more

begging the light to shed no more

and, on command, a wisp of wind

brings the light, the flame, to an end...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

the metaphors, the analogies, the pictures burning, the doubt, the hope, another cog turning... ()the light is waning, the fuel is running low
his will is draining, preparing for the show
his heartbeat's fading, slowing for the race
the room shading, shrouding out his face() this was the original 2nd verse

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